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Post by Gilbert Beilschmidt on Jan 25, 2011 22:07:37 GMT -5
Her username is Endless Disco Heaven. I don't know how often she gets on but I can harass her tomorrow at school. i sent her a message and a link. and when all of the allies are taken soon, Im going to make a Allies meeting and an Axis powers meeting when they get taken too. so i really want france and germany to be taken soon I know! I need a West to bother! |
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Post by Arthur Kirkland on Jan 25, 2011 22:10:29 GMT -5
and I need a France to get mad at! hey, you have a gaia right? if you joined a hetalia rp on it, get on of the characters to be Ludwig. that's what I did
and i harrassed my best friend (Ivan) to join :3
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Post by Gilbert Beilschmidt on Jan 25, 2011 22:12:26 GMT -5
and I need a France to get mad at! hey, you have a gaia right? if you joined a hetalia rp on it, get on of the characters to be Ludwig. that's what I did and i harrassed my best friend (Ivan) to join :3 I'll see who else I can harass. I haven't joined an RP on Gaia yet though. |
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Post by Arthur Kirkland on Jan 25, 2011 22:13:31 GMT -5
haha kay! good luck with that! im gonna go harass other gaians too!
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Post by Antonio Carriedo on Jan 25, 2011 22:22:48 GMT -5
You don't have to look if you don't want to, but this is the beginning of my World War2 story. I just want some feedback on it^^
<b>The End of the Axis</b>
<b>“Ludwig what’s that? Oh, Ludwig how much longer until we eat pasta?”</b> Ludwig quickly placed his hand over my mouth and leaned in to whisper something in my ear. “Shhh! The führer is speaking to the sturmobteilung. If he catches you talking, I don’t know if I’ll be able to protect you…”,he trailed off. He sighed and looked at me as if to ask if he was asking if I was going to really listen this time. I nodded and he released his hand.I was very bored, but I kept quiet.
The meeting droned on and on for hours. One of the worst parts was that I couldn’t understand a word of what they were saying! Ludwig’s boss was very loud and scary.Every time his boss spoke Ludwig’s eyes seemed to glaze over like he was in another world. He was scaring me too.
“Yay! It’s finally over; I can go and eat some pasta now!” I grabbed a hold of Ludwig’s arm and began to yank him toward his place. He always has some pasta ingredients waiting for me there. We continued to walk and I continued to cuddle his arm, but as we were walking I saw something very saddening. My smile loosened and my heart felt uneasy. A family of three was being pushed into a car. The child of the lady was nestled in her arms. The baby looked no bigger than the size of a football. I tugged down on Ludwig’s arm and he looked at me. I frowned and pointed to the Gestapo who were harshly pushing that the man and the women holding that small child. ”What did they do to make the Gestapo angry?” They didn't seem like they would do anything bad. The women had long brown hair and the man was tall, Bald, and slender. They seemed like a normal loving family, noy criminals. Ludwig looked over and glared at the family. “They were born”, was his only answer. I shuddered.I didn’t dare ask any more questions regarding the Gestapo again. I really felt it was better to just keep my mouth shut about it. I glanced over to the spot where they were once more, but they had already driven off.
When we arrived at Ludwig’s Austria was their lounging on the couch reading a book. Roderich had just moved in, Ludwig said it was his bosses idea. I don’t mind Roderich, but he yells at Ludwig a lot and it makes me sad. I heard also that big brother Francis and Feliks moved in recently to. I haven’t seen them around though. I look around every time I'm here without much luck. I gave up and asked Ludwig where they were, he told me that they were downstairs’ resting,and I shouldn’t try and go down there. I guess they were really tired.
Everything was going fine until Roderich got up and walked over to Ludwig. “Ludwig! I know both of our places are joined now, but I don’t want to have to keep choking on the smoke that comes from those camps!” Camps? Oh, Ludwig has some of those at my place to! I remember when he told me they were to hold all the bad guy’s they captured, so I never went to one. Ludwig said that it would be safer if I didn’t go, and I trust Ludwig so I listened. Roderich was still talking, I tried to tune him out but he was just so loud. “I don’t want the pure people and I to suffer from this. Can you stop burning all th-“He was cut off mid-sentence by Ludwig’s hand. Ludwig then leaned down and whispered something in his ear, I heard it but I couldn’t understand it. He spoke in German. I think I heard something like, ”Sagen sie ein wort und ich werde dich zu brennen”, whatever that means! It felt kinda awkward after he said that though. They both scowled at each other for a moment and then Roderich slapped Ludwig’s hand away. I wonder what really happened.
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Post by Arthur Kirkland on Jan 25, 2011 22:27:06 GMT -5
wow that's really good!
are you going to post it up on fanfiction or something? send me the link when your done! it looks really good!
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Post by Antonio Carriedo on Jan 25, 2011 22:49:59 GMT -5
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Post by Gilbert Beilschmidt on Jan 25, 2011 22:50:03 GMT -5
Oh, my God. I can't read WWII fics. >.> They make my stomach churn.
That said....yours was very good. You are a very skilled writer; I envy your writing ability. "^^
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Post by Antonio Carriedo on Jan 25, 2011 22:53:40 GMT -5
Awww thank you!
I kinda though the writing was low leveled, but you just gave me some confidence!
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Post by Gilbert Beilschmidt on Jan 25, 2011 23:01:02 GMT -5
I can't even write first-person xD I like to think I'm far better at third-person, myself. But yes, it's really good.  Don't worry, no artist ever likes their own work. XD |
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Post by Toris Laurinaitis on Jan 25, 2011 23:01:20 GMT -5
FFFF.
that's the second time I read that story XD
or
third. XD
damn you. XD
still love you though~
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wait isn't the topic of this Yaoi? XD what happened to it all ;o;
lolwut
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Post by Gilbert Beilschmidt on Jan 25, 2011 23:02:59 GMT -5
I have no idea! Not that you people would want to be subjected to my horrible noobish smut scenes, but this forum was originally for people who wanted to have some hot yaoi roleplaying action. x3
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Post by Antonio Carriedo on Jan 25, 2011 23:08:04 GMT -5
That means me! I'm an awesome yaoi writer~ I can be VERY descriptive.... ;D
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Post by Toris Laurinaitis on Jan 25, 2011 23:11:19 GMT -5
Ooooh, I would like that.
that'd be.
fabulous, as Poland would say.
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Post by Antonio Carriedo on Jan 25, 2011 23:31:43 GMT -5
I shall do you all then! Spain is now an official whore!
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Don't worry, no artist ever likes their own work. XD